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Open Poetry #36

Unimaginable

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-08-17 01:31 PM

Unimaginable

gently I wake
with green
oasis of home
in blankets
of possibilities
perfectly matched
with me invited
where I have
living room
life for me
has turned
genuinely unbelievable

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2005-08-17 02:37 PM

I like the simple sentiments in this one, good write

Regards
Olias

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-08-17 03:24 PM

Hi, Helen. It is so good to look through your eyes today!

....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (08-17-2005 05:26 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-08-17 05:26 PM

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-08-17 05:28 PM

Unbelievable is a good thing and you say it perfectly hear...*big hugs*

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2005-08-17 06:11 PM

Visions of living deep!!

CT

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2005-08-17 09:34 PM

And lady it was darn time! Nice to see you and enjoy that green grass of home.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2005-08-17 09:53 PM

I touch the screen and have hope.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2005-08-18 08:54 AM

ms slick..

days are pages
with two sides
enjoyed your pen here

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2005-08-22 03:25 PM

I tried to pick a favorite line and couldn't... I love them all! *S* Happiness looks so good on you, lady! *S*

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