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Sea Story |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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In their morning, I have seen the women who are seals swimming to shore A slender trail through, the wave... an azure wedding veil Given limbs they glide the land, knowing no other way to move From depths I never knew before I have seen the women who are seals going to marry their fabled loves |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the first time i read this i thought that line one read 'mourning' lol now i forgot what i was going to write don't get mad, get even just kidding, John |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"In their morning, I have seen the women who are seals swimming to shore A slender trail through, the wave... an azure wedding veil" Oh brilliant imagery...just, perfect. I wish i had written that a  M  ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
On a scale of 1 to 10 - well, 10 of course! Excellent writing! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the imagery John ...the azure wedding veil |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
as long as he is a seal. enjoyed and quite an opinion on. |
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