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VBallNut
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since 2003-02-12
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Virginia, USA

0 posted 2005-08-16 10:21 PM


I am stuck in time
In a life not quite mine
Every one step forward
Later feels like ten back
I want to run - to leave
The grasp of the eaves
That are holding me tight
Only releasing at night
I am used and abused
Only, they are amused
I come at their beckon
I feel I should kick 'em
But for now I'll just stay
And I'll do as they say
Because all in due time
I'll re-claim the life MINE


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-08-16 10:55 PM


what power!
iliana
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2 posted 2005-08-16 11:52 PM


Know exactly what you mean.  Very nice to read your work VBallNut.  
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-08-21 11:15 AM


still feeling this!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-08-21 11:18 AM


You are not going to feel "STUCK" anymore with your new attitude and the intention of reclaiming your life! Good for you! ~ and sending you lots of good luck!

Love & Light,
EA

VBallNut
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since 2003-02-12
Posts 60
Virginia, USA
5 posted 2005-08-21 10:56 PM


Thank you all for reading & understanding!

I'm having a difficult time with one of my jobs & this was just a little venting...while I'm still feeling as if I'm being walked all over, writing definitely helps to calm me down a bit.

Thanks again!

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