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Gentle Rain
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Gentle Rain |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Would that I be the Gentle rain To wash down your mountainous burden, To cleanse your troubles Flowing over rock faces And between your boulders, Caressing your graces. Could that I carry your woes Down to where are lush meadows And flowers blooming full, Moving those rough pebbles Whether they need push or pull Let me remove your troubles. Let my gentle rain comfort you Till time returns skies of blue And your foundation is strong And head is in fluffy clouds, When you return to a happy song, Content, confident and proud. Gloom |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gandolf, this is beautiful. Hey...how ya been? ........  ....jo |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
You might be the Rain, but you seem like a mountan of strength to me. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Prof, Some how I think you can. Lovely, soothing write. I'm proud to know you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Jo I’ve been busy, Hence the lack of posting. Pleased my Grayness can give a bit to you To enjoy. Thank you, MyHeart, In nature all is mixed, There is comfort in comforting Strength in supporting others. Thank you, Larry Glad you liked And it’s a honor to call you a friend. (promise the next prose installment soon if I can stop rewriting it) Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very generous offering, which people everywhere are so in need of..... and can't help but wonder why that is...can you? Well done hun, enjoyed this splendid articulation of your heart. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hang my thoughts, those of before and those of now impressed by the softness of words, caring, so often lacking letting them paint my body with fragments of memory, gentle strokes in blending. Have I told you lately? No, been walking alone too much words being planted where they cannot grow. The seeds of my unrest suffer me, linking beyond my yesterdays when all I wish for is the myst from the reign of ... *inspired this morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, She needs but a teaspoon of this every morning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prof~ Know what ??? This is a gentle word-light that shines brightly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Beautiful Professor - nice to read you again |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely Gloom. A pleasure to read. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mr Gloom now this is absolutely soft, gentle, and so very lovely. Nice to see this from your pen. yesterday is gone |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That's two beauties in one day I've read from your pen, Professor. *A pair of A+ writes* |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is nothing Gloom-y about this sensually beautiful piece of writing! I thoroughly enjoyed this gift from your pen ~ and heart!  You write of the dark and of the Light, equally well! It is just that we "angels" prefer the latter!  Love & Light, EA |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank goodness for gentle people as yourself. Enjoyed very much. msicellanea |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank You. Everyone, I am surprised by the response to this one, But well pleased. Gloom |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This sounds like something I could use!! Well done Mr. Gloomy one! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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