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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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4 years; my friend o dear friend has been that long since i heard your sound that used to whisper through silence breaking through as i struggle through city sounds of fast cars and motor whirrs time has been slow yet so fast that i could barely catch a breath without forgetting to think of your presence i remember the golden times of rock shows dreamtheater, metallica, maiden, muse and what not? even prodigy! yes you are the prodigal one himself and you remain my best friend 4 years and in this week of aircrashes all i remember is 4 years back when news filtered through through cold dark clouds that a two-seater had crashed in antwerp and took my best friend to ground what remained was is memories of life that lasted in past tense! and we shared life friendship alas! truth how i wish you were here life has moved on yet, we remain best friends like blood brothers |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sudhir, what a deep pain I feel with this write. I can understand the emotions that leave it titleless.  ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sudhir, I am so sorry for the loss of your friend and for that young man, his life. How truly tragic. I felt your words to my very core. In some ways, he can be a closer friend to you now that he is in spirit... Love & Eternal Light, Linda P.S. That is a mighty handsome photo of yourself that you have posted! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, this touches me deeply. Emotional write - my thoughts are with you. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I feel the ache of thismy thoughts are with you also |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Only you could break my heart so sweetly. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes, indeed. Goodness, this is just beautiful. and thus, reading my mind, once again: time has been slow yet so fast that i could barely catch a breath without forgetting to think of your presence you write of passing much more eloquently than I could, sir. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 tearing the heart apart with this; but it is so sweetly written, and such tenderness as this is proof that the bonds of close friendships can last forever |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A poem that touches the heart deeply...It needs no title for the words expressed here are title enough to let all hear...*big hugs* |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Its very good to read you again, Sudhir Even in this affirmation, your talent shines |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful way of keeping his memory alive... very touching...~~**~~ |
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