Love Beneath The Willows (with EV2)

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Open Poetry #36

Love Beneath The Willows (with EV2)

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2005-08-16 12:02 PM

Love Beneath The Willows

Take my hand;
come lie with me beneath the willow tree.
We’ll let want roam freely as tongues entwine.
Fools suffer not hearts that would beat together,
as the warm breeze carries moans to heights undreamt.
Let our cries be garbled by the pressing of lips,
as bodies nudge in cadence,
burning hot ‘til need is fulfilled.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-08-16 12:31 PM

YouTwo~
Steamed up my mind with imagery~

Nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-08-16 01:39 PM

ahem....you are steaming up the monitor

what a nice duet!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-08-16 03:36 PM

I am curious about the research required for you two to write so sensuously as one!

Duet again, pleaaase!

Linda

P.S. Froggy I recently posted a poem entitled "Miller's Pond" that you might enjoy! It is about a froggy! lol

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-08-16 03:57 PM

Froggy

-- this is a sizzler!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-08-16 05:17 PM

wow, I'm really impressed!
Usually duets are long and drawn-out, but this is incredible!

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

6 posted 2005-08-16 06:24 PM

Froggy

That pool must be super-heated.

Good to see an indepth let it go set of words.

Bodger

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-08-16 07:52 PM

Enjoyed...James

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

8 posted 2005-12-19 10:35 PM

this is very beautiful little forggy woman...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-12-20 09:45 AM

Oh, I remember this one very well! I enjoyed the read even more the second time through!

Please tell EV2 that he is missed!

You write soooo well together!

Linda

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