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Touch a Hand
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Touch a Hand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Touch a Hand Touch the hand of another man And you touch the hand of God For he’s a symbol of the plan And was made from this very sod We are the essence of the ground It is upon this very stage I would you have a look around Where spawns the cook of symbols page We seek we find we fall behind It is a process full of awe There never was a contract signed We are the DNA of core No chance in hell to stop the fan Or peek ahead the final sod But touch the hand another man And you will touch the hand of God So this is what I seek to do Perhaps the hand I touch be you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh Sy, your poetry sings out like a chorus of clear visions...I have to struggle sometime, to hold back tears of joy from your words...because of you, the darkness shifts into words saying Hey, you have to wake up!  Morning Sy |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wise words this morning dear Seymour. Another keeper for my library of you. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 The Hands of God and Man ~ Michelangelo Buonarroti ~  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Sy? You touch all ages... Always. That's why we love you! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! I absolutely love this poem...again you surprise me with the talent that flows in your fingers...I felt a heartfelt prayer in your words and added my amen to it....Stunning....*big hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We seek we find we fall behind It is a process full of awe There never was a contract signed We are the DNA of core No chance in hell to stop the fan Or peek ahead the final sod But touch the hand another man And you will touch the hand of God ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ YOU ROCK!! YOU ROCK!! YOU ROCK!!!  and I am smiling at these replies ... do you see how you reach with your rhymes... not only do you touch...you give us cadence kisses.   *ww*   Im not asking for a moment, all I want is time |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to put in me mothy library. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What Earth Angel did was exactly what I envisioned when I read this wise poem. *hugs to you, Sy*........jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Outstanding in word and thought, Sy. This is a true pleasure to read and to catalog. Thanks... misc'e |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, this is so true...and what it's all about. I've never thought we could live alone, but must live with and for our fellow man....then God is pleased with us. A good thought-provoking poem, Sir, and I love it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning sweety. Chris, You are a dove of love. Earth Angel You see there are no original thoughts. Sunshine Yes I meant all hands Startime55 Thank you for the Bravo. passing Thank you sweet. JM, And you pour the water on those rocks. WW iliana Thank you love. miscellanea You made my day. Ethel, Hugs back. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I hunted everywhere for this picture I had before and couldn't find it, darn it. However, I hope the hand you touch is mine, as you certainly have done wonders by touching my mind and heart Sy. We are indeed the DNA of core, and I sure as heck wish the world would realize that before my number is up! Great job on this one, it was of course a keeper. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here...gotta hand it to you, Sy, you really know how to reach out and touch everyone else by the hand, and you do so with such great rhymes! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I have felt your hand many a time....thank you!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, The hand I touch is yours. Midnitesun I touched your hand many a time. Martie And I have felt yours. |
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