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poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

0 posted 2005-08-16 01:45 AM

The stars shine above us
Uniting souls that are oblivious to eachother
Their hearts meant to be
Yet their faces and names are mysteries
Call them starcrossed lovers
The full moon is the unity of their hearts
Eyes locked on the exact same star
It seems this is meant to be
Fate playing its ironic jokes again
Knowing that their hands should be locked together
Yet keeping them apart
Hearts pining for true love
Still believing in that one special someone
Like Romeo and Juliet
They are kept apart for no reason
A cold wind cuts the star gazing short
Both parties head back inside
Wondering if love truly exists
Not knowing the truth

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-08-16 02:04 AM

Enjoyed this very much, Poe.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-08-16 01:44 PM

nice visual imagery here, poet poe

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-08-16 05:22 PM

a familiar scene

loved this write, the ending perfect

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2005-08-18 12:07 PM

fate is a mystery to us all...but those lucky enough to figure it out, find that one true love....hope you have found it...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2005-08-18 07:08 AM

Call them starcrossed lovers
The full moon is the unity of their hearts
Eyes locked on the exact same star
It seems this is meant to be
Fate playing its ironic jokes again
Knowing that their hands should be locked together
Yet keeping them apart
Hearts pining for true love

YES it is like that, starcrossed love is as close as the moon outside your window

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-08-18 07:23 AM

I see that you are "Living in Canada for now". Well, I hope it is a loooong time! We never can have too many poets up here north of the 49th parallel!

I have had similar thoughts but had never put pen to paper to express them. Thank you for doing it for me! ~ and so well!

Love & Starlight,
EA

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2005-08-18 08:30 PM

Well done Poe

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

8 posted 2005-08-19 06:05 PM

Thank you iliana. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Thank you Midnitesun. though it is hard to capture the lovers heart, no pun intended.
Thank you, passing shadows. You are correct it is an all to familiar seen. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you, marcel. I have not found it yet, but I will never give up looking. Fate is truly an enigma.
Thank you, inkedgoddess. I could not have said it better myself.
Thank you, Earth Angel. I am living in Canada for now, no place can ever have too many poets. I state for now, because one never knows what the future holds.
I am glad to oblige.
Thank you, Daniel J D.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

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