Open Poetry #36 |
summers passing. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
my bones they feel autumn coming and my heart i know will soon feel winter the frost will come and i'll be left in the cold waiting for summers thaw once more my hearts strings have been played and here i am sheets of music on the floor and i don't know what to play you'll leave through the cold and expect me to stay warm here i am standing with my hands in the air waiting till you see it could be summer all year if only you would let it |
||
© Copyright 2005 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved | |||
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Another heartfelt write. |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I know how this feels a write straight from the heart, for sure |
||
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful. <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
||
marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
dang, sounds like the man in this scenerio has a good thing and does not know it...I feel the quiet but strong voice in this...beautifully expressed and real to the touch... |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |