this isn't a hollywood ending.

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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-08-16 12:53 PM

right now
this life
it's all i have
this isn't a movie
no soundtrack in the backround
no perfectly played lines
i'm just me
and you're just you
can you accept that

can you accept
that i can't wait for you
that my heart can't streach far enough
to reach from summer to summer
there'll be wear and tear
i'm not so sure i'm strong enough
and i'm not so sure
my heart can take another disappointment
another heartache.

a guarantee
isn't something you can give me
but it's the one thing that i need
it's the one perfect line
i need to hear

this isn't a hollywood ending
the girl
and
the guy
don't always find each other
sometimes were left in the dark
arms streatched
waiting to hear our soundtrack kick in

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2005-08-16 01:02 AM

My friend, I'm quickly becoming a big fan of your work!! No, life rarely holds that kind of Hollywood type ending, but the spirit we keep inside sees us through somehow, doesn't it?? I wish you the best...~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

2 posted 2005-08-16 01:28 AM

Brilliant! I know this all too well...all too well! Life is too real to afford a soundtrack...that's why I listen to my music full blast! Lovely write!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-08-16 01:29 AM

Like this...James

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

4 posted 2005-08-16 01:30 AM

Brutaly honest, everything can not be scripted perfectly and that embrace is not always perfect.
Great write.
I love the truth in it.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-08-16 02:19 AM

I almost feel I shouldn't have read this...you take the reader right into your intimate thoughts, very effectively.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-08-16 06:05 AM

very cool write, just because I know

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-08-16 10:04 AM

waiting to hear our soundtrack kick in

I'm in all at the open raw honesty of this, seeps right to the bone, and words like mature, respect, common sense and fairness reach me through your words...

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2005-08-16 10:24 AM

A feeling that touches us all....you write it perfectly...a heartbreaking read...*big hugs*

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