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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I contemplated your mouth with popsicle handcuffs against your lips making them suffer the cold til your saliva overflows a smile niagara perhaps if that was the right place I touched in your thoughts when you were helpless improper and I was nursing your wounds without band-aids in my kit you said I kept hurting you just enough to make you enjoy the healing process especially the itching then when it was almost scar less ____________ dark scribblenote: double parked at the ink-slingers den |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I contemplated your mouth with popsicle handcuffs against your lips ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a smile niagara perhaps if that was the right place I touched in your thoughts when you were helpless improper ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ only you could come up with that opening line.  even your scribblenotes are poetic.  way cool groovy guy. I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ah shucks ms jm..you just blush me thanks lady |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I contemplated your mouth ~*~ Can anyone get past that first line?  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
eventually I suspect maybe under the skin a bit? thank you ms white |
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