All Over With, LET ME OUT!

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Open Poetry #36

All Over With, LET ME OUT!

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-08-14 02:47 AM

I take these pills and try to grin,
Swallow hard and take it in.
"LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!" I'm screamin'.
ALL O-VER WITH!!
You know nothing of what's in my head,
So forget all the things I've ever said.
"LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!" I'm screamin'.
ALL O-VER WITH!!
You couldn't possibly understand,
Why I speak with blundered hand.
"LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!" I'm screamin'.
ALL O-VER WITH!!
Have you felt what I have faced?
Some "cure" type drug swallowed and embraced.
"LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!" I'm screamin'.
ALL O-VER WITH!!
You aren't here to see what's around me,
These Icey hands engulf and surround me.
"LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!" I'm screamin'.
ALL O-VER WITH!!
"LET ME OUT! LET ME OUT!" I'm screamin'.
Now I'm...
ALL O-VER WITH!!

i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2005-08-14 11:20 AM

Incredibly pain filled...Amazingly powerful writing...*hugs*

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2005-08-15 12:13 PM

very strong emotions - makes me ponder the pain here

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-08-15 03:48 AM

powerful emotions yes

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-08-16 03:21 PM

Hi, Hot Flakes! It appears that you have been going through trying times! You powerfully illustrated your angst and frustration in this poem.

~ "Have you felt what I have faced?" ~ Only if I were to walk a mile in your mocassins would I know how you truly feel.

Giving you a big, comforting hug ~ and another drug, (Sorry, I jested re the drug bit!)

EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-08-16 05:12 PM

this sounds like a song

loved this, because I can relate

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-08-16 05:37 PM

Iti does sound like a song, Snowflake -- a pretty heavy one, too. The rhythm and words sound like they would do well with a metal band. Hope things get better for you.

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