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Open Poetry #36

Faded... To Ash

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-08-13 06:58 PM

Fifty tons
    pressing
my worlds weight
upon weak
   now slow pumping organs
insomnia
  insanity
black void
where wishful thinking
faded    to ash
dissopated
to gentle breathing
  quick images
surging   through me
   engulfing
grasping only grey areas
  envisioning emerald pastures
              only to find
i'm still alone     a silhouette
   of something lost over time

8-13-05

  * i just wrote this piece so i'd appreciate any feed back on it, and thank you...

" Breathe life, for you are not alone"
- Killswitch Engage

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-08-13 07:05 PM

sad write, very descriptive

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2005-08-14 03:20 AM

indeed

i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise

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