Open Poetry #36 |
The Passion |
lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
She has furnished a kingdom within my heart, and wove a crown of golden laurels, that stand for love that lives upon my flesh. Beloved, as her soul caused passion flowers to blossom within me unlike that of time which falls a withering rose if true love is not found. I give my soul to her before the heavens, nor will I ever be without the fruits of the Gods. I drink from the rich fountain of Athos where my heart flows freely with amorous care. One minute before the design of her lovely face is more beautiful than the skies portrait of a Tuscan sun. Received by grace, a star of benign light shall fall before her and a bright angel shall enlighten her spiritual eyes. Her beauty is like that of a pleasant song, to anything that breathes the sweet air taken from the earth. Traces of her passion are found within my heart with the harp playing the many tones of love. (C) Kevin Brian Wright |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Romantically beautiful and filled with the magic of passion...Very well said...*hugs* |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
THANK YOU, MUCH! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! how romantic this is! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
many thanks for your reply!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
How beautiful! This reads like a whispered prayer before the soft light of candles at midnight... Enjoyed! ~tier |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
THANK YOU! |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
I don't know what to say to you...you take the very breath of me from my core! I can't help it...I love your work. Me encanta! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
The feeling of devout love is expressed in such a beautiful form. It captures the reader off gaurd Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
That last line....whoa.....I am melting! Truly, a declaration of love!!! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
thank you |
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