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Open Poetry #36

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2005-08-12 10:35 AM

To start this game, was so niave
after half a life, do you believe?
you know my soul, but still decieve
yourself like this? it makes me grieve.

I tried so hard, to give you space
some room to win, to save some face
A place to find, reclaim your pride
A place to find yourself inside

We lost our chance, so long ago
I left a chance for you to grow
but in the end, the coin you spent
you waste upon our innocent

and one last chance, I'll give you now
to take your win and walk somehow
but if you hurt my girls again
this game you started I will end

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-12 10:51 AM

very understanding, with yet a warning not to be so haphazard with the hearts of precious ones...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-08-12 12:38 PM

ouch

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-08-12 01:34 PM

WOW!!! Powerfully written...A very strong poem that warns where warning is needed...*big hugs*

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2005-08-12 06:01 PM

Hey Jason:

seems as if you have nearly described a bit of my past up there.

Good to see you writing again.

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