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In the Month of Remember
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In the Month of Remember |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In the Month of Remember What does it hurt then, Remembering ~ Seems quite innocent If we chance upon A moment In the month of remember, A dateless time, With only a pen to guide us Only a page to inspire A moment Unsurpassed as never before Or ever will be, Again. So I ask you, What if We take a lifetime of Remembers Encapsulate them Into this Moment And make it A Life’s span… Would you love with me there? ~*~ to Janet Marie and Martie, and Gentle Spirit, for a poem, and a comment… I shall never forget. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"So I ask you, What if We take a lifetime of Remembers Encapsulate them Into this Moment And make it A Life’s span… Would you love with me there?" Those words made me think. My lifetime of remembers are not something I would want to make a life's span....could I pick and choose instead?  Very nicely done Karilea. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What does it hurt then, Remembering ~ you already know my answer to that one momma k. thank you.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Susan, Donna... When you remember only the good, knowing you've tucked the worst away... then yes, pick and choose... exactly. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
like a spiritual float, some might call it ADD, in our case, selective ADD...huh? Completely wrapped me up in a very contented sigh... Beautifully articulated! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the month of remember, A dateless time, With only a pen to guide us Only a page to inspire A moment Unsurpassed as never before Or ever will be, Again. So I ask you, What if We take a lifetime of Remembers Encapsulate them Into this Moment ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ well I dont know what I said,(you know I talk too much)  hehbut this is lovely...wistfully, sofly lovely. "If words but could...they would" your poetry always does. I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my what a soothing note to sing to the soul....how profound your words that touch deeply bringing a smile with the joyful memories that flow to feed the heart....**big big hugs* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I think we can choose a month, a day, an hour or one tiny second, to remember love forever...indeed a lifetime. So, the answer is, YES!  |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..very lyric..a pleasurable will read again, one.. spiros ----- |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
I loved this write, you are very in touch with tne now. If you know what I mean, Steve |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The title caught me ... ... the words filled me!! a great write!! CT |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow. I come back from camping to such an exceptional first read!! Awesome Karilea. hugs, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SIL -- you've got me speechless on this one...romance at its finest. lol...and I kept hearing that darn song, "Try to remember a time in September."  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully penned! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine...Memories of a lifetime put into words on a blank page that we share along with our hearts. Beautiful...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kari, this is absolutely beautiful! Thank you for sharing this keepsake. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
May I add my compliments on your ever-beautiful thoughts in this lovely work of art? You always have just the right thing to say, and I especially love this one, Karilea.....~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I came back, to read this again.. and smile. LUVYA MommaK.  |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
I am not sure how I missed this the first time around...but it is lovely!! Wishing that I could take all the beautiful moments in my life and relive them forever...but then...it would be Heaven and I wouldn't be able to learn all the things that God has in store for my future. I guess taking the memory and playing it through my minds eye will have to do the trick till that day comes, huh??? Hugs to you, Sunshine!! This was beautiful.... ~ Becka |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
'Would you love with me there?' Yes dear friend, I would. Beautiful as always Sunshinygirl m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Nicely done. What month is that? I forget.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful and full of something I can't put in words.. I love it. - Meg |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This was good... Thanks for sharing....... Poetry can get you very far |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Karilea. |
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