nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2005-08-10
09:34 PM
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A Poem's Invent
I can take it you know, sarcasm and such. It can leave me with feelings, though empty of touch.
It can spirit my will, make me harden the core. The softness then changes to the darkness of more.
It's not what you think, the name in a name. Petaled, the flowers pigmented the same.
A Lady of She, to the Errant of man, leaves the dreamscape to nightmares, the film in the can.
Just a curious She with a friendly approach, touching a nerve that's received lesson, coached
Knowing nothing of more nor nothing of less, so my thoughts for the now turn aside, to digress...
Words, they're just words, no meaning is spent. Free for the taking... a poem's invent.
M"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss)
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Wynter Bliss
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Midnitesun
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
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posted
2005-08-10
09:57 PM
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very, very cleverly written
"Petaled, the flowers pigmented the same"
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ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
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posted
2005-08-10
10:16 PM
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Creation is the Mother of Invention ...
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ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
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posted
2005-08-13
11:30 AM
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... this deserves another rise to the top ...
a fine write!!
CT
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Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
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2005-08-13
11:36 AM
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I am glad this one came to the top...It is a wonderful read with great wisdom too...*big hugs*
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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posted
2005-08-13
01:36 PM
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Knowing nothing of more nor nothing of less, so my thoughts for the now turn aside, to digress...
My feelings exactly, M.....
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2005-08-13
03:44 PM
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well said
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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
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posted
2005-08-13
05:53 PM
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So true.
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