Open Poetry #36 |
'Love' (Twenty or less) |
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love... Where all thought ends keeps us perched on that fatal balcony. 'Love'. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's good...I like it well done |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Well done! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A very creative and unique image, Nancy: "perched on that fatal balcony"... Yeah, I guess it is kinda like that... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wow Nancy I wasnt expecting the fatal line, great job and image here....indeed.... hugsss pretty lady... I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy Romeo and Juliet perhaps? |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This is so beautiful my friend. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I can definitely see where you are coming from with regards to how you define love. Enjoyed! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"Love" this write Tinker. You do twenty or less so well. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Both you and Mark Sheldon have a wonderful way of capturing so much, with exacting word layouts...lovely! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
And an image is presented Bodger |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Love this.....:-) ----------ice/ford ><> |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
This is so beautiful |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
yeah it does |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely beautiful writing Nancy |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
just great Nancy - you say love so wonderfully and with such depth - Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nancy, this is lovely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all so very much for your warm replies~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
your use of "fatal" made me raise my eyebrows, in a good way |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
Woah…. Just before the fall.. beyond the control of emotions, yet… wanting to fly.. Enjoyed this write! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enchanting and sweet, much enjoyed, NancyLeel! Have a great day! ....jo |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
WOW, you really have it good! |
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