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Open Poetry #35

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marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2005-03-17 01:00 AM

People

People are quite funny
To the Gods who smile from above;
Playing games within the ultimate game,
Without truly knowing their opponent.

A tragedy it will be,
When awakened from the deepest slumber,
Coming to the now pointless realization---
That there were far better ways
To spend time that was borrowed.

Marcel

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2005-03-17 03:25 AM

one understands hominids attack first
reason last;
the challenge for differences wet palates
moreso than forums for tranquility

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-03-17 09:49 AM

Uniquely put and very substancial in weight and gift.
Thanks Marcel.
TD

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-03-17 10:02 AM

Hmmm, interesting points to ponder with this intriguing piece of writing. This poem carries more weight with each subsequent read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-03-18 08:02 PM

I almost missed this

glad I went back

good piece!

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