Lingering Shoulders of White

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-03-15 06:11 PM

Touch the sky of blue, caress the winds
that move me, smell the flowers blooming,
laugh and ever sooth me.

Feel the warmth of a hearts flow, the smell
of a night’s mist laced with shoulders
white....look lingeringly into the mirror
of my soul, reach out...touch me.

Ride the endless cresting wave of a sigh, traverse
the mountains peak upon the eagle’s cry,
the lure of tea, a touch against soft
lips....the pound and skip before the
one last tantalizing sip.

Touch the rose of magic, raise the smooth and
gilded wand, feel the air electric
....skip the flat stone’s pond....

If I were a warrior, wilt thee be my maid,
standing ever elegant, basking morning’s shade.
Longing for the moment when fingers dance
the vine....as I draw a breath for thee
and dream that thee art mine...

.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-15-2005 08:26 PM).]

Enchantress
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Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-03-15 06:15 PM

"Touch the rose of magic, raise the
gilded wand, feel the air electric
....skip the flat stone’s pond...."

WOW!! Beautiful Barry...
White Shoulders linger as well

Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2005-03-15 08:26 PM

Very well done, Barry..!! Really enjoyed this...

Jimmy

Martie

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California

3 posted 2005-03-15 09:05 PM

Very Barry.....Beautiful and very romantic!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-03-15 09:09 PM

Barry,
You old devil you. Beautiful write.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-03-15 10:31 PM

Very romantic Magnus my friend. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2005-03-15 10:57 PM

you're a charmer

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

7 posted 2005-03-16 03:07 PM

This is absolutely lovely... excellent write!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-03-18 12:32 PM

~ Reach out and touch you?!? My goodness! You wouldn't have to ask a woman more than once, to be sure! lol

"Lingering Shoulders of White" ~ Well, I do have white shoulders ~ and I mist myself with "White Shoulders". ~ Do those count?

I love your loving poems!

EA

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2005-03-18 07:22 AM

Feel the warmth of a hearts flow, the smell
of a night’s mist laced with shoulders
white....look lingeringly into the mirror
of my soul, reach out...touch me.

Loved this Barry!

Liked the Title too~

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2005-03-18 09:44 AM

"Longing for the moment when fingers dance
the vine....as I draw a breath for thee
and dream that thee art mine..."

Yesss words just fall as petals.

Wonderful, still.

Sincerely,
Reg

"A woman with no past has no future."

Oscar Wilde

"The only way to get rid of temptation is to yield it."

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2005-03-18 09:49 AM

This is absolutely beautiful.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2005-03-18 10:09 AM

Damn Barry - what maid could resist such a warrior's passion as this? I love your gentle touch that sears with the brand of heart's fire deep -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

13 posted 2005-03-19 11:58 AM

sensually elegant! Beautifully written;

miscellanea

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2005-03-19 01:21 PM

Magnus~
I often *sigh* with the sheer pleasured knowledge of knowing you~
This is whispered so beautifully~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

15 posted 2005-03-20 09:02 AM

Have read this many times before I could respond in words. What romantic impact took hold of my heart in the caress of your thoughts. By far one of your best and most tender renderings.

TD

TexUS
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Posts 228

16 posted 2005-03-20 09:26 AM

Completely wonderful write!

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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right...there

17 posted 2005-03-21 08:46 AM

This is a treasure Barry.

believe in what your heart feels...

kayjay
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Oregon

18 posted 2005-03-21 11:10 AM

Oh sure, by the time I get to this fine write, all the good words are taken. Nontheless, I enjoyed it very much. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

19 posted 2005-03-21 11:13 AM

fantabulous writing Barry, much enjoyed this.

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