Open Poetry #35 |
Rendered Silence |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rendered Silence I squeezed the silence of my mind To see the residue I’d find And in the process of the press I found the clothing of the less I found desire is a view And illusion is a coup And in the silence of the shroud Lies the taste of being proud I found the taste of it a snort And the opulence a wart And in the silence of extreme Lies the essence of a scream For all is under times control In the building of a soul Homogenous is the mean And only tenuous the scene So if you would content your fate Live your life a natural state |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I found the taste of it a snort And the opulence a wart And in the silence of extreme Lies the essence of a scream Good Morning Sy I don't know why, but while reading, invisioned the Gladiator...loved that movie... Anyway, you project a mind full of wisdom this morning...warm hugs and thank you for the smiling sun |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For all is under times control In the building of a soul Homogenous is the mean And only tenuous the scene ============================ what would we do without our morning dose of Sy wisdom. Homogenous is the mean And only tenuous the scene how can I not love lines like those? you are the *winkiest of the winkies* *L* one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning and thank you sweety. JM, Shall we saddle Randy and visit a rainbow today? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour your words have the ability to transport the mind to a wonderful, dream-filled place. Thankyou for this & hugs, Chris "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you and kisses and hugs back. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ I know that there is so much more to your poem than snorts and warts, but those are the words that are sticking to my halo! Another creative and imaginative write! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Don't let the snorts and warts worry you. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words are always such a treat... beautiful rhymes full of wisdom. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Love you too. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Such wisdom in words and good advice...thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well said! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Never got around to tasing a "snort" Seymour...but after reading this I may just give it a try. Might not too! Enjoy this piece my friend. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you dear. passing Sweet dreams my lady. jwesley Well a snort would be better than a wart. Thank you |
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