Open Poetry #35 |
Couple |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
When single is no longer an option life alone means living like a dog couple mode comes in handy single style lustre fades one can always live alone watch dishes pile in the sink sleep with empty pillow alongside until couple mode comes in vogue when single is no longer an option a table set for one, brings tears one thinks there must be ideal company there has to be someone to share for everyone there is a mate to meet on determined date couple mode falls into place single styles lose their grace. |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
This is a very nice piece. Good job. ~~Dara Beth~~ If everyone would smile, we would have a world of happy people. Just a suggestion. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Couple mode is wonderful ~ if you have the right partner. If not, single mode definitely has its advantages. I thank my lucky stars that I have the perfect partner and am thorougly enjoying the couple mode ~ and so is he! May this be the same for you as well! EA |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Neat poem... Yes, I think we each have our mates or connections in the universe. As to address your poem, I think singles and couples have their unique advantages and disadvantages... and at the "determined date". Enjoyed, miscellanea |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yes,there is always someone to share our expereinces as there are always people who will differ from us..thanks for sharing |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thou speakest truth, my friend....yea verily doth it fade..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Cute poem....I think you're right. ...jo |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks all for reading, how can I do a poem on celebacy without one on couples |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I watch those couples sometimes wonder if they are really happy |
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