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Spin The Dream
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Spin The Dream |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Spin The Dream Spin your words into my soul Drape them over my eyes Across my spirit Like so Soft like a Dream in the round As if you were Only half in the world Do you see? ….. Perhaps you imagine That when you Weave your words Into ribbons of wonder I don’t feel them Stroking my mind With a soft insistence And can cast Them off As if they weren’t Real delight Maybe its because They’re ethereal Half there And yet, yet Almost not Just like a misty breath That is only Vaguely touching Frosting the Corners of my mind With dreams Almost thought So they are a wish Or maybe they Are more like a dream But whatever They are You weave them Into pure And unadulterated Magic So take this small Piece, this tiny part And spin it into A dream in the round Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Just like a misty breath That is only Vaguely touching" This verse caught my attention. The entire write is wonderful, but this verse speaks loud. Very nice. JL  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful spinning and dreaming Marsha, so good to see your words again dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, lady... this is so beautiful... It takes me onto two pathways... one a path of romance... and no one writes romance better than you do... so that's a lovely path, indeed. *S* The other is a path of poetry... Those paths often parallel each other but they're distinct... and perhaps that path is even more important to me... for poets who weave their words, inspiring and finding inspiration... they're a comfortable constant... as is your talent. *S* Beautiful work!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Spin your words into my soul Drape them over my eyes Across my spirit Like so Soft like a Dream in the round As if you were Only half in the world you had my eyes with the first line....enjoyed |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This -- well, you know what I think....it's destined to be one of my favorites here or anywhere else, and I'm so glad you've posted it.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very sweet, keep it up!!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marsha Just beautiful, and filled with such enthusiasm...loved it! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I forgot to library this... blonde... yes. *G* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes, like the others, this is really nice~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well done! .....jo |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Let's spin this beauty right back to the top -- and add it to my library! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Just like a misty breath That is only Vaguely touching Frosting the Corners of my mind" ~ I especially enjoyed the above lines! You spin a very romantic dream of a poem! Love, Light, & Romance, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous |
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