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This, Beyond Everything
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This, Beyond Everything |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Perfect as a valentine or of forever~~ lovely as always, M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful sharing of the gift of love! Love the presentation! Love, Margherita |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Wow! How can one make reply to this? It reaches down into the soul and says...Hey this is how I feel...and there is nothing you can do about it! Bravo! I love the depth of emotion you have managed to convey within this piece. It really makes me ah... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sigh - beautiful - a wish, a dream- the deepest longing of the human heart - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem is "Beyond Everything"! A lovely valentine poem you have penned!  EA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
just, sighhhhh. and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
kevin.... how? as only... you can. thank you all so much for the responses to this one. it's funny that valentines would be mentioned..i'm probably one of the last people around who couldn't be more... UNvalentine-like. :-) again... thank you all!! snow "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a beautiful Valentine, Snow! Happy Day! jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady Snow this is beautiful...wether your a valentine kinda gal or not, you wrote it beautifully |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so completely perfect....  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
awwwwww thank you all so very very much for such warm thoughts. :-) happy mushy pink hearts and all that stuff to you all "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.....and as the moon opens, closes, opens, closes....it says one thing only: ......and you know what that is. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I love this!!! Those first lines had me nodding... and it just kept getting better. *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadySnow~ Oh what a classy beauty this is~ My ... my ... your talent is shining, lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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