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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-03-13 06:01 PM

My soul speaks softly
of falling star fantasies—

bright light shine
caught upon dragon fly wings—

iridescent imaginings of
gossamer shimmer
and angelic glimmer
cast
upon whisper breezes

Can you see them dance?

in silk spun verse
and sigh spent breaths?

word songs flowing in time
to heart sung arias
in sheerest cascade
of poetic harmony—

oh— can you hear it. . .

the soft string sounds of
the felicity of mind waltzing

the fragile soul sighs of yearning

stirring a commotion
in a flutter come lovely

the fanciful flight
of day thought dreams

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-03-13 06:04 PM

I liked this one alot. (; good job Susan.

Juju

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

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Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2005-03-13 06:14 PM

elegantly and discriminatingly assembled musing Susan

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2005-03-13 06:24 PM

Oh this is nice. It just breathes magic. You and Dark Angel should duet, you both have similar poetic voices.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2005-03-13 09:40 PM

Absolutely LOVE this! Very jealous I did not write it. LOL! Bravo Susan...this is truly a great poem.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-03-14 11:08 AM

thank you my friends, for your kind words and the gift you give me in leaving your replies-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

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az, usa

6 posted 2005-03-15 12:22 PM

loved the flow of this beautifully written piece!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-03-15 02:01 AM

Susan, I both see and hear your fanciful day thought dreams.

You write with the grace of a butterfly in flight.

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Linda

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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8 posted 2005-03-15 02:38 AM

Bumping this back to the top...because I love it that much!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2005-03-15 06:22 AM

Beautiful again...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2005-03-15 06:45 AM

I am never disappointed upon clicking your name...sweet sentimental write...a lovely journey you take the reader on. Thank you Susan

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2005-03-15 06:51 AM

well ya know what I think

my chaps are your chaps (grin)

enjoyed it mrs

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2005-03-15 10:18 AM

Smiling at my friends - you delight me and warm my heart - what a blessed woman I am to have such kindness set at my door - love you all -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2005-03-19 08:14 PM

like a thousand butterflies flitting over
a meadow, rising, falling, flying about.

Nicely done Susan...just about how my dreams
or daydreams are...so quick, flittering
here and there.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2005-03-19 08:48 PM

Thank you Barry - they do seem to flutter by rather quickly - but oh so lovely at times -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

15 posted 2005-03-21 07:08 PM

Softly beautiful.

Eric

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

16 posted 2005-03-21 07:17 PM

Susan

"oh— can you hear it. . ."

I certainly can...it's beautiful!

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

17 posted 2005-03-21 08:06 PM

Susan, way to lay down the silken thread for readers to be caught up in. Hmm. I guess that makes me stuck on you. lol

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2005-03-22 03:52 AM

Enjoyed...James

suthern

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Posts 20723
Louisiana

19 posted 2005-03-22 05:19 AM

I didn't want it to end... it's that beautiful. *S*

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

20 posted 2005-03-22 08:52 AM

I wrapped myself in the silk of your words
and enjoyed the beauty of it Susan..

this was outstanding and thus dubbed
a

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

21 posted 2005-03-22 10:14 AM

You are all so very kind and delight me with a warm smile - thank you-

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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