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Open Poetry #35
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Lurking
0 posted 2005-03-12 07:39 AM

Rain.

Low spots where puddles form
to swell,
vast waters created,
rippling bodies
Ant Oceans
and a drink for a dog.


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of Depression
1 posted 2005-03-12 07:49 AM

Brief, but well packed,
a fine job
excellant poem

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2 posted 2005-03-12 07:52 AM

Great things come inside small packages!
~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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