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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-03-09 11:13 PM



(a year old. my muse, she died a horrible death, i believe)



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-03-10 12:22 PM


Mmm...like this. Very sensual...though I do not like the comment on muses dying. I would be lost without mine.
ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-03-10 01:09 AM


but like a pheonix there is rebirth from the ashes of a former state, no?


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3 posted 2005-03-10 03:19 AM


agreeing with Martin here
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4 posted 2005-03-10 04:45 AM


Projecting thought images onto my mind here snow, thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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5 posted 2005-06-17 09:10 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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