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A really long poem ( for me)
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A really long poem ( for me) |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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You remind me of a bad dream We fall in love; you go away Off to a place to some sunset I fall to my knees and I say: Such are these stars, so beautiful... How I wish that here you can stay... I'll leave you too I'll find my way I'll brake this heart Over again. What can I say maybe to me allways in love allways gets hurt, but I'll pick up and go back home |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good attitude here I like it |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Awesome write. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Exactly!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bravo! You picked yourself up by the bootstraps and got on with your life! That kind of positive attitude will get you far in life!  Love & Light, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I always say there are opposites...if someone doesn't appreciate you...somewhere there is someone that will...so if you want appreciation you need to lose the someone that doesn't give it and to find the one that knows how to give....James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
thank you for your comments. (; Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Enjoyed  Andrew |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
Willing to take a chance is scary, but knowing you can go home is comfort. I enjoyed this long poem of yours. You should do it more often.  ~~Dara Beth~~ |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
very nice thanks |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
thank you, I am glad you liked it. Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
sounds so childish but is so honest that it is touching. -majnu |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
thankyou Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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