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mistress fernando
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mistress fernando |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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does she bother you my satin of gypsy mountain how she juts her warm her latina shiver with the slow easy her glisten of morning with tequilla seep sunrise and sun tan salty how she presses her curves to my leather and says she would take my metal any time any where and loves it better when being too rough hurts her some but not enough does she surprise you with her wanton so unlady like just there and bare whispering to my eyes like there was no one else close enough to hear but she knows you are and always pressed against me like a velvet sin tattoo or the valley of my shadow my gypsy of dream words does she bother you when she reaches between us and brushes your ends with her warm santa ana when she says you are pretty and it might be fun to know us both sometime and would I mind sharing you __________________ dark (scribblenote..san fernando valley is just off 101..a bit of coastal air..but mostly more of a hemingway afternoon of slow easy sipsations...the santa anas' are winds that drift from the east and make your sweat feel cool when you find a shade tree waiting to admire your tin) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh my dear man, you bring sweet tears to my eyes...as my aunt oft times told me stories as this one of yours today...she so loved the San Fernando Valley as much as you...and often spoke of each years poppies....such a lovely landscape you describe, in all her wonder...and miraculous song Hugs and thank you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh you smile me - and yes, I could envy such a valley - for such temptations she bears and offers - enjoyed this muchly shadow man-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you lee j, you bless me lady friend.. ______________ susan, glad you disapprove (wink) but I know you would enjoy her thanks love for the eyes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS A wave across "the city", from my valley Gabriel, to yours.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lil neighbor.. a hug back to touch your wave with smile eyes thanks lady friend |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
One for the 'brary. Yum. If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and says she would take my metal any time any where and loves it better when being too rough hurts her some but not enough PAIN ME im yours |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh god, I'm definitely looking forward til the next windy Down Under day  sexy this and I sigh. Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you ~Buckingham/Nicks |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
mmmmm... you do write. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Most interesting use of imagery....some, like the wind, without actually stating it....it's just there. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not so many months ago I was going through Gaviota Pass where the Santa Ana winds are never so "mild" when in season...and as always, that ride was as religious an experience as I have ever known. That particular part of the country holds a special part of me...so thank you for Mistress Fernando... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
someday I will get to California...so much beauty to see~~ in the meantime you provide the eyes M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you all for the comments..you bless me with your reviews.. indi-eve, inky,maree, nan, ratleader, sunshine and maureen, you are great, thanks |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes it is a nice sensual visual, as seen through your eyes  My spirit will rise |
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