Open Poetry #35 |
Healed |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Those that rinsed their minds purified their waters those who rinsed their bodies discolored the source in the end the mind healed the body limped a great release occured a cave rock moved and the spirit escaped.... centuries passed spirit gazes unleashed powers to heal restore inner peace the ignorant remained inobservant they rinsed their minds, so they thought others washed their flesh their bodies limped but heal sores vanished a great release occured |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I enjoyed reading this incredible peice of poetry, thank you for sharing it Andrew |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I think there's still room to be healed...in any way, thanks Andrew |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Martin, I agree with you about room to heal. Enjoyed this piece very much. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Elie After the petition I reminded you about no one has signed for several months; I thought you should know that.It is a shame. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what petition? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gives a whole new meaning to the cliche, "It's never to late" well done |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
No it's never too late to learn but so many of us like to pull an attitude when that time comes. |
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