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Sleepy by the sea
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Sleepy by the sea |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Sleepy by the sea The sleepy tide trickles up the barren shore the waves roll in roll in forever more black sky, grey sea the sleepy tide rolls in rolls up the barren shore and trickles in forever more. Edit: Just the addition of and in the last line  [This message has been edited by Marshalzu (03-08-2005 06:15 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this scene...fits my mood tonight |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was a very effective visual with the lines waving back and forth. Both the presentation and your calming words were hypnotizing!  Love & Light, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I enjoyed this as well... |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for the replies Andrew |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
makes me want to sleep by the sea~ ~ARh We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
soothing, comfortable, could feel the lazy in the day...serenity kisses your cheek |
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