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Before the Joust
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Before the Joust |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
My dear Lady, this love token I take Of thy true love and unbound affection; To be borne on my chest to banish all ache, A cherished beam of your own reflection. And as I raise my lance to aim my foe, Silent hush falls over tournament square; The force of your love shall brightly glow And guide to victory the point of my flare. But should my own Fate yet unkind prevail And aim to tear your own Light from my chest; My heart and my hand in this life shall not fail, Your token of silver only death can wrest: For if it shall fall and from me thus part, So it will follow my own splintered heart. CG |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
CG I can see you haven't lost your touch. Yet another fine piece you have penned. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wow |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My love will give you strength, to conquer thy deadly foe, for it is wide, infinity in length, all my affections on you I bestow, Brave ye are, my noble knight, to give your life for me, love so strong beating red,bright, Looking into thy emerald eyes I see, Love so true, devotion, I see myself inside those green fields, I see and feel your souls lotion, rubbing all over me, my heart yields, No splinter shall inflict, for my love is your shield, coating, covering you to protect, so my love will not be killed, Victory is yours my love, the battle is already won, For it is written in the stars above, that you and I are already one, No man can separate us forever, for flesh is just flesh, for our hearts and souls are sewn together, allowing fate and love to to the rest.... You are the bravest knight, my Arthur...Pride is glowing upon my face in a form of a smile....no other knight in the land honors me so! ~Thy Fiery Lady We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
My dear Lady of the Red Velvet Cloak, You honor me well beyond my true worth. No words I could ever write, could ever match the raw emotion contained within yours. I thank you from the depth of my still unsplintered heart.  Your Knight, Arthur |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
A toast~~ to your still unsplintered heart Lady O |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very romantic... gotta loe the knight stuff : ) was just at the celtic fair yesterday where there was jousting championships... one was a women... beautiful write |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very romantic. Methinks I couldst grow never weary of thine words. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Great writes that I have read between the Fair Lady and her Knight. I believe this adventure will have no end Tom The Rogue |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
nicely done |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A poem of gallantry to the utmost degree!  EA |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
My dear people....me thinks im going to be sick... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Splendid |
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