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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-03-07 02:32 PM

Instrumental Wind

tell me again of
how whispers gather
in darkness
to become bouquets
of fresh cut stars
upon the edge of night
a word in the breeze
is the very window kiss
that talks to me softly
in a language I understand
where white petals split
from garden’s black lace
a heavy scent curving
leaf woven to sound
planted by moonlight
tenderness’ vine tumbling
a sigh told windward

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2005-03-07 05:12 PM

I think it is...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2005-03-07 05:38 PM

Exceptional.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-03-07 09:57 PM

Lovely sound it makes in a poem...this poem!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-03-07 10:00 PM

This is absolutely stunningly beautiful.

I especially enjoyed the following lines ~

"tell me again of
how whispers gather
in darkness
to become bouquets
of fresh cut stars
upon the edge of night"

EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-03-07 10:55 PM

amazing piece

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2005-03-08 08:23 PM

This is wonderful....

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2005-03-08 08:24 PM

I was caught by the inner rhythm which I felt by this .....

    .... it felt truly alive!!



                       thanks for sharing!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2005-03-08 09:34 PM

...hey you, been awhile....as usual my heart quivered, sighed . . . skipped a beat.

j.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

9 posted 2005-03-13 10:03 PM

Since I missed responding to this awesome write the first time, I figured I would give it another bump to show my apreciation for it.
Great Job.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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