Open Poetry #35 |
Our Pilgrimage |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
upon this painted pony of pretty prose spoken rides my heart beat longing in rhythm to the hooves of a gallop song driven across the sun kissed prairie of love thoughts shimmering beneath the warm golden glow of your soul shine expanse I feel your breeze blown breath upon my rose blushed cheeks in open air caress your wind fingers strumming through hair strands streaming kindling eye light fire within my far sighted gaze you are the mountain range looming stalwart and steadfast horizon gifts giving in solid rise promise brushed in lavender blue hues of my deep seeded need to be enveloped by you can you hear the coyote sounds rejoicing? at the star shine rise as we bask in the moon glow blessing awash across our frontier exploration of these virgin lands that accept our trail blazed passing seared in lover’s brand upon our hands s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . [This message has been edited by Susan (03-07-2005 10:28 PM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very well written. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome what a vision what feeling My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmmmmmmmmm got my brandin iron heated and my tattoo rig sharpened and my tie up good rope all coiled so..can I color you? enjoyed this suzz |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~wonderful~ hugs, Chris "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Grover - for your double the fun MmmmGroves - you smile me - thank you for your warm my friend D - let me explore your mind thought lands colored by your dream touches - yes please - Chris - thank you for your kindness - Hugs all - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Funny...I DO hear the coyote howling...or is that my dog out back whinning? (can't be, she's chasing squirrels in God's yard now...) Either way,really enjoyed this...loved the picture too (new to me, but would even if it was old to me) and as always, enjoyed your words. Jimmy |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I love this Susan. 'Tis a beautful picture you paint. Very lucky guy indeed. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Jimmy - you smile me - thank you for the delight of your reply Kevin - you are most kind, my friend - thank you Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Susan, very nicely written - really enjoyed this one. (A Prairie girl at heart yanno.) What's past is prologue. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
So wonderfully evocative of bot imagery and feelings that you paint ~P |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Mysteria - there is something about the praries, yes - with the mountains looming in the distance - just on the edge- Thank you Chosi - most kind Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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