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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I was walking past the bank one day I heard a teller scream, I took a look inside to see What did her loud scream mean? Customers too were freaking out, But no gunmen were in view, Dialed 911 on my cell-type phone, And called the boys in blue. The SWAT team came all dressed in black, Set up a defense line, Choppers flying overhead Newscasters "Live at nine" The bank was now surrounded, With cops with guns and more The intruder finally captured Behind the bank vault door. No cash was lost-nobody hurt It was a false alarm, It seems as though the culprit Was a mouse that was unarmed. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing, you brought a huge smile to face, thanks for sharing  Andrew |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww....cute write Toe!! Much enjoyed the smiles today. hugs, Chris Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Ha Ha... what a great write-- uplifting and original!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Toe! I needed the smiles today.. thank you for bringing them to me. Hugs~Nancy ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Giggles - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... She'd never survive the farm! LOL Enjoyed this... thanks for the grins!!! *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 You nutcase you - thanks for a chuckle today. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So is that rodent on Balladeer's payroll? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Larry, it took me years to train that mouse!!  Toe, the rodent-writer....hmmm. I think you've found your niche, weasel-breath. Nice write |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
rofl! Too funny! Good to see both you and LJ back haunting these pages, Toe! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe |
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