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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-07 06:48 AM



my hands were cold
upon the pale of her breasts
as she bid me lay
to warm between

then laughed at me
with wind sound giggle
as my pockets gathered sand
and my buckle made scars

on her belly's complection
but she craved my boots
how the toes dug in
when I was over her

and she was under
and the sun was behind
looking down
speaking jealous heatred

and the tides beside
said I should be theirs
instead of hers
they watered dark stones

to make me unkept promises
_______________

dark

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-03-07 07:05 AM


you rock

(I thought it should be read as an addendum, but true, nevertheless)

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-07 07:55 AM


and the tides beside
said I should be theirs
instead of hers
they watered dark stones

to make me unkept promises


heavy music those tides do play...at times
and yet...today awaits...awaits....

Good Morning


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-03-07 10:24 AM


Mmmmmmm - sand songs most sensual, D - you breathe life into the seaside - especially when you wear those boots!

Morning -   Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2005-03-07 01:43 PM



MGROVES
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Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
5 posted 2005-03-07 05:44 PM


enjoyed this

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2005-03-08 10:39 PM


you ooze warm mud
as i bathe within your valley

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