Open Poetry #35 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Broken Just walking down this dusty road Only you on my mind The way you dumped me... Yesterday's rainbow now seems unreal And useless and colorless and superficial. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
![]() Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sorry you are hurting.... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
ditto... I can feel your hurt. I hope you feel better soon... sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
![]() there are more rainbows yet to come |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh! my!! god!! m'friend ,glover~ ![]() ![]() my heart saddens, seeing you in pain~ but your being here eases the sorrow in my own heart~ being dumped, coming back, dumped again. so i parted to move on in life. if it's meant to be, it will, if not , it wont. life goes on, sad to say. enough of that. i am so glad to see you here. i pray all gets well and your dreams come true, ![]() |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks everyone... I'm not going through this. Rather, it is something from my past. I'm in love with the same woman I married 25 years ago. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I write lots of stuff like this...from disappointments of many years ago...James |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Nice to read your stuff again Grover. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
It's easy to use and let others use us..good little write ![]() |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hi - I fished you out of my library ![]() You're really good at showing strong emotions with words that don't get too flowery.. I love it - it really aches.. ![]() Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^ |
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