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Dear Lady
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Dear Lady |
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This Errant Knight Junior Member
since 2005-03-01
Posts 12Paradise |
Dear Lady, Thy epistle’s dost create In this Errant Knights heart A sweet and tender ache, Of want of ours to meet. For thou to peer unto mine heart And therein see the hunger, A longing for touch of thine hand On which I would live forever. For thee to see with mine eyes The beauty ye would parade afore me, Eyes that hath seen many a sunrise Yet they all pale afore ye. T’is these thoughts And many more That this Errant Knight in his quest As yet but half complete Causes him to hasten forth For his beloved to meet. And if on thine Errant Knights arrival You should give him entrance at the door He shall come in, and go out never more. Yours always Errant Knight |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice write. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how sweet!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A lovely offering - gallant - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The call of such a noble man would stir the droplets in a crystal pool to rain, pouring heart and soul into his cupped hand. Very tender the response to some lucky lady. TD |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this is so touching~ that it touched deep~ deep enough to give my soul a smile My spirit will rise |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Another delightful post! ~sadie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, TD said it so well... write on! |
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This Errant Knight Junior Member
since 2005-03-01
Posts 12Paradise |
Tis but a humble knight calling to the maiden whom hath shown me the light and what could be if she would accept one such as me. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Can't miss... I really liked this. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I hope that the fair maiden opens her heart to you~ nice poem! ~ARH  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh! Such a heartfelt write in the language of olden days but from olden days cometh the present. May the door be opened unto you! I know it will be because there's something magical about people who come from Paradise. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
'Tis a moment in heart, mine reaching into another allowing Thy touch~ Lady O |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well...this was so well done, it seems Lady O has succumbed to your entreaty!  |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Yes, it certainly appears so. CG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words of love and romance are most certainly fit for a fine maiden. I hope she enjoys your words of love. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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This Errant Knight Junior Member
since 2005-03-01
Posts 12Paradise |
Such warmth in response and encouragement makes for warmth of heart. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love it.... what can I say. firemen and kights |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
if the lady does not accept and drops it she is but a fool |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ah, 'tis almost checkmate? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely! |
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