Open Poetry #35 |
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Accellerated White (Magnus TD duet) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bring time to trickle through my hands Still echoed afterglow of plans A feathers trail, dead aim and sail That flashes still a moment's hail Half passed to stall Unchanged et all No turns or nervous rendezvous But charged the point that's coming through Strong the pull against the tip as fingers feel the weathered grip undaunted in the flight to blue in search the wicked tethered shrew. His stance as stone against the steel in wait the cease of time's reveal. For whence the blade does nick the bone of ivory cast...he falls....alone To be...the moments of eternity A flight so sleek in final draw As silver moves aside in awe The parted clouds by parted lip And through the echo quivers slip To be defining moments blessed As time itself might now attest Streak the heavens as comets fly, Time is a treasure never to die Around the moon, the Milky Way Infinite motion, here to stay Copyright 03/05/05 |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This was very beautifully done. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You two always do such wonderful duets...it's kind of like dancing..you don't miss a beat...and Barry, I hope doesn't step on TD's feet! ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Her feet are too small....I keep missing them...(by accident, of course).... Thanx Kathy for letting me join in a small stretch of poetic wings. You excel, as always. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the flow here is incredible...you two are terrific together ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You two do duets muy bueno! Each collaborative effort is a treat to read! You are both excellent poets in your own right ~ and together there is added magic! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
'tis true, when the two of you duet, you flow seamlessly upon the page - blending beautifully - Enjoyed - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I just LOVE duets! even though I can't do them well myself |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So many thanks to all of you for replying in such wonderful ways. The Magnus is a delightful dancer, and I must convey, he missed me...every single time. Thank you Barry for such a kind tune to blend with. TD |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
![]() awesome ![]() My spirit will rise |
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