Accellerated White (Magnus TD duet)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-03-05 08:00 PM

Bring time to trickle through my hands
Still echoed afterglow of plans
A feathers trail, dead aim and sail
That flashes still a moment's hail
Half passed to stall
Unchanged et all
No turns or nervous rendezvous
But charged the point that's coming through

Strong the pull against the tip
as fingers feel the weathered grip
undaunted in the flight to blue
in search the wicked tethered shrew.
His stance as stone against the steel
in wait the cease of time's reveal.
For whence the blade does nick the bone
of ivory cast...he falls....alone

To be...the moments of eternity
A flight so sleek in final draw
As silver moves aside in awe
The parted clouds by parted lip
And through the echo quivers slip
To be defining moments blessed
As time itself might now attest

Streak the heavens as comets fly,
Time is a treasure never to die
Around the moon, the Milky Way
Infinite motion, here to stay

Copyright 03/05/05

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-03-05 08:16 PM

This was very beautifully done.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-03-05 08:54 PM

You two always do such wonderful duets...it's kind of like dancing..you don't miss a beat...and Barry, I hope doesn't step on TD's feet!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-03-06 10:24 AM

Her feet are too small....I keep missing
them...(by accident, of course)....

Thanx Kathy for letting me join in a small
stretch of poetic wings. You excel, as
always.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-03-06 10:43 AM

the flow here is incredible...you two are terrific together

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-03-06 11:02 AM

You two do duets muy bueno! Each collaborative effort is a treat to read!
You are both excellent poets in your own right ~ and together there is added magic!

Linda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-03-06 02:42 PM

'tis true, when the two of you duet, you flow seamlessly upon the page - blending beautifully -

Enjoyed -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2005-03-06 04:47 PM

nice write

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-03-06 08:32 PM

I just LOVE duets! even though I can't do them well myself

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2005-03-06 08:49 PM

So many thanks to all of you for replying in such wonderful ways. The Magnus is a delightful dancer, and I must convey, he missed me...every single time.

Thank you Barry for such a kind tune to blend with.

TD

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-03-06 09:36 PM

awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.