Open Poetry #35 |
I miss you |
NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
i went to see you today no answers to my calls the silence tells all i miss you i miss you so much my heart bleeds when i think of you i love you and i always will do time can not change a thing just make my heart go on aching it has now been nearly 10 years since i last saw you and saw you gaze I miss you nan more than anything now i need you nan if you only knew how why do i still feel this way time is suposed to heal you with every comming of a new day but then i stop and stand still and think of you and it hurts so much that your not around i want to be swallowed up in to the ground i love you nan more than words can say annd i keep wishing that just for an extra day that you could have stayed. In loving memory of my Nan R.I.P Died 1996 The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Whilst losing someone close to you can be hard and hurt a great deal it is important to remember the good times that you have shared rather than dwelling on what you are missing. A great write. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I sooooooo understand this - the loss of one so very near and dear and necessary to our tender - my heart to yours susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, remember all that you were given, smile...it was a gift, a treasure, one that shall never fade... |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Nice tribute. Awesome write. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
NF Your love and loss are so apparent in this poem....I understand and wish you well! |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
thankyou all so much, it is the good times that i miss with her and thats what makes me sad, i do cherish every minuet she spent with me and i spent with her, thankyou. C.J The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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