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Until Darkness Consumes
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Until Darkness Consumes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A ride to where loneliness befits me, taking in what once was, what once meant the meet of meet, sitting there hour after hour, the inside to cry the day away until darkness consumes and the need to need dissolves. The outside a model of fake giving smiles away to the familiar, laughing in hues of sadness, pretending that once the meaning was true, truer than ever shown, the letting as hard to do as the letting go of. It's there still in the walk, the aisles leading to the storefronts, viewing as in mirror, distortions of loving, distortions of believing. Seating myself there to watch alone this day and feel... as does Alicethruglass~ M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
insightful thoughts   thanks for sharing all your thoughts My spirit will rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
really you do have a way... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
well done - can feel the shadows - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the shadows aren't so bad..I actually feel very comfortable where I went...no one knows me so I can be whoever and however I choose. Thanks M |
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