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Dieing Embers
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Dieing Embers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dieing Embers The embers lay a soft chambray A dusty grey of times display Yet in the cracks lay fires light In memory of a blaze of bright Another way of life’s transform Reduced into a common norm Waiting for the breeze to blow To change it into newer sew Transformation bends the lay Into other forms of stay Challenging the mind of man Assigning man its caravan It is the structure of adjust Transcending mind to what it must And in that transcendental wile Is the nature of the guile? So if I make you smile a bit It’s all the art of symbols wit |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
morning sir  a smile upon my face~ to you a warm embrace~ My spirit will rise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And who would know better than the Artist himself? Good morning, our Sy!    |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Good Saturday morning Seymour! Enjoyed this lovely write. hugs, Chris Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yes! "So if I make you smile a bit It’s all the art of symbols wit" *curtsy* you make me smile whenever I read you (seriously, I wonder how the heck you do it every day, then I just smile 'cause I'm glad you do). "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Another way of life’s transform Reduced into a common norm Waiting for the breeze to blow To change it into newer sew She finds Knight in every man watching eyes to read the know. With needle, thread upon each morn the newer of, will aptly sew. To bring to He a (Sigh's)relief, in turn of words, in twist of lore. 'Tis only time, a moment's share You are to She, a *smile* and more... Lady Ollyne |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Good day Sey...more fine words from the rhymester..thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES A warm embrace, thank you. Sunshine Good morning love.  Chris And a lovely morning to you. Susan It's because I see you here evey day. Lady Now that is a lovely if I ever read one. Goldenrose My pleasure, thank you. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing Andrew |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The embers lay a soft chambray A dusty grey of times display ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ya had me from hello...  could those opening lines be any cooler? yes...your word play, internal rhymes and assonance get me every time... and yes...your symbols are the wile of me smile.  This was pure poetic pleasure read aloud me sweet Sy-guy. *winkiewinkie*   one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew, Thank you, thank you. JM, "your symbols are the wile of me smile." Speaking of cool. Winkiewinkie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweety. |
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