Open Poetry #35 |
the gamble |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Neither won. Yet, I lost. Have you lost your craving? Me. I crave my losses. Mind. Peace. Matter. You. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I crave my losses... how well I understand that!!! *S* I liked this very much, my friend... great work! *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh, a short but perfect keeper! Thankyou for this my smilin' friend ! hugs, Chris Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It's great to read your words again. This was thought provoking... I really liked your word play in these two lines: "Have you lost your craving? Me. I crave my losses" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir, my friend I adore your new voice. It reminds me of the great beat poets. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
merci beaucoup! ...beat poet... makes me think regards sudhir |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Enjoyed this! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Liking this introspection, Suddie! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes they are a loss for a reason.. I did enjoy your words and thoughts. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank ye all... regards sudhir |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
interesting play with words and nice twist with the ending - Susan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Delightful! |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
nice. have you been reading adrienne rich. -majnu |
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