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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-03-01 11:46 AM


TM®

Air rests on red lips of significant dress
You say, you’ll save questions for another day
Regardless of age or consequence
Broader comprehension opens a gateway
Releasing itself, unto itself
Like you did for me….
Endless likely-hood, taps my shoulder
Just like it used to be, years ago
Bubbling bliss finds inner skills
Purifying and nourishing influence
You were a beautiful Maharishi
We crayoned outside the lines
Turning around to a unique culture
With a wide range of continuing highs
You are the traveler
Finding a rare rose budding
You smile, while breathing deeply into my lungs
Carefully tucking my mind into bed
Just like that one time
Remember, taking care of me when I was sick?
You took care of any latent impromptu
Knowing full well, my cause was suffering
Bless your soul…
Frequency was a higher vocal IQ
One I’d not yet met, but knew existed
Sorely, emotionally immature
You painted me naked, like a true artist
The hope diamond around my neck
Reducing trite biased impulsiveness
Beneath the chaos of mundane thoughts
All was still and shining
You penetrated my human gypsy
Muscles in your face grew relaxed
I felt your breath filling my body
Like a crystal ball, illuminated
Floating in the deepest part of my mind
Suspended in silence, spirits locked
Becoming the center of all things
I feel your scent within me
your voice speaking to my eyes
your arms holding me safe like a promise
“Dhammakaya”!


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-03-01 11:50 AM


how very soft and lovely Lee....
enjoyed this view of you.  Nicely done.

JL
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2 posted 2005-03-01 01:19 PM


Did you study at the Buddhist Meditation Institute??

This is a great write Lee J.  So enjoyed.

JL


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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-03-01 01:24 PM


"Like a crystal ball, illuminated
Floating in the deepest part of my mind
Suspended in silence, spirits locked
Becoming the center of all things
I feel your scent within me
your voice speaking to my eyes
your arms holding me safe like a promise
“Dhammakaya”!"

Beautiful Lee...absolutely beautiful!!!

~ The most beautiful poem ever written..
    was written by you in my heart ~

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-03-01 02:29 PM


Lee~
You are often my thoughts in crystalized-words~

This is stunning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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miscellanea
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OH
5 posted 2005-03-01 02:40 PM


"Bubbling bliss finds inner skills"

Isn't this the absolute truth?  You have such an analytical mind!  As always, I enjoy your unique outlook and imagery.

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