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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{A Ramble of sorts} You say you will come again: this time I will await through each season that leaves winter empty, each hope and promise given the tip of your tongue that buries the burning of this beginning -- because it feels right because you know the grey scatter well this movement, will become the journey; for each crest of moonlight I will call out to you, answer your given name, it is all about return enough faith to live by for what-ever remains -- while your hands search for glass pieces of what has yet to happen and shatters in its wake, everything along the way while some still sleep so soundly, you stir each breath, each rise of chest, each echo of heartbeat in midnight’s true silence to settle and plant the rooted seeds of life & rebirth and in your search for the walk of path to home &find where you learned you leave your soul for good intentions, your slip of calm becomes the obsession of dreams so that at the edge of light, into such a room, will give way each morning--- so dawn can smooth itself against rough stones ~~*~~ I'm Standing on a bridge I'm waitin in the dark I thought that you'd be here by now Theres nothing but the rain ~~**~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
it is all about return enough faith to live by for what-ever remains -- while your hands search for glass pieces of what has yet to happen and shatters in its wake, everything along the way everything you write lands gently in my heart lady lauren....  sweet sis... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and in your search ~*~ We should embrace every day that allows for a search of some kind.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A dance upon the stones of a brook. Enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ too sis~ Karilea~ never a truer word spoken...thank you ~ SY~I love the meaning and image of that....thank you... ~~*~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww, Lady, your some kind of poetess, this was astounding!!!!! Thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so dawn can smooth itself against rough stones wonderful touching writing, Lauren M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very, very nice!! Enjoyed. JL  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ Willow whispers from the lovely Lady Lauren. Your words caress the souls of your readers. Love & Light, Linda |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
so dawn can smooth itself against rough stones Oh sheeesh, what a scene..in these lines alone. Beautiful Lauren. Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
while some still sleep so soundly, you stir each breath, each rise of chest, each echo of heartbeat in midnight’s true silence to settle and plant the rooted seeds of life & rebirth this is just a "ramble of sorts"?! Remarkable. hugs, Chris Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
this movement, will become the journey; for each crest of moonlight You write the prettiest pieces, Lauren~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love a good ramble, and I certainly enjoyed yours! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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