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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Dream Creatures Throaty narcotic Sandhya Rotating like a water wheel Oozing apparitions, Like 5 satin sheets unfolding In weightless mind winds Requests, walking amidst the Jiva Mantras, paying homage to essence From a worldwide soul maestro Transcending balanced familiarity Well springs of emotions shivering Whitecaps of the moon Dancing on dream seas Hints, solving conundrum Saints, widely read in memory Smearing, aerobatic creamsicles Inside my mind There…the hereafter of day’s events Become friends Lighting quiet eyes From life’s unfolding embrace Children’s truths go round Naming humility Linguistic broad cloth Center’s, moist cheeks intertwine A wordless affirmation Portrait of love Orchestrates gentle arms Of a lover….averting my gaze Refined implications Eternal pores in abstract art Failure becomes inventions In the winds of our souls Mutual inner worlds coupling Inheritance becomes our way Without concern Other then to please Adorning ourselves in redefinement Taking home newness Promising directive Water music Fullness within our grasp Tender lighthouse...we Secret place of the dream creatures |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You've put much to ponder in a small space. Lots of images float by. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ In each sentence lies a separate poem. That is the key to your writing. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
...always such a pleasure to find you~excellent spill... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Refined implications Eternal pores in abstract art Failure becomes inventions In the winds of our souls Mutual inner worlds coupling Inheritance becomes our way Without concern Other then to please Adorning ourselves in redefinement Taking home newness " Very nice Lee J. These ten lines stand out on their own. Enjoyed. JL  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Dancing on dream seas Hints, solving conundrum Saints, widely read in memory Smearing, aerobatic creamsicles Inside my mind enjoying the mindflights tonight |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
sounds of lovely meditation - someday i would like to transcend - but first i must learn to let go - enjoyed your visions in the mind's eye SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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