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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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let my name be the breath upon your lips inhaled savored then devoured in hunger will you taste of me? whisper me into your memory hold me in a mind meld shatter me into a thousand pieces then pick me up again . . . I am yours this body offered this heart rendered this soul bound will you take me? will you make me part of you woven into your threads tied with the knot of love and entwined in limbs then never let me go . . . s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
talk about a heartbeat of a request...  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This just shone with passion and is a very beautifull and loving poem...such heat..such fervour...such devotion...such an excellant poem...thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
All I can say is where is a fan when ya need one. LOL Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan need you ask does the dawn not speak and the evening not whisper that the inside of your thought is the outside of my day dream |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely, simply lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely this.. Lovely you... Beautifully said. Hugs~Nancy ~ The most beautiful poem ever written.. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you all for your warm and encouragement - it smiles my heart - Hugs all - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and who could say no  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome write! Eric |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
whisper me into your memory hold me in a mind meld shatter me into a thousand pieces then pick me up again . . . WOW! your poem, perfect... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
truly, who could say no? Rf |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wow...can hear hearts pounding here. Excellent write! "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
*smiling here* thank you my friends - am glad you enjoy this one and its emotional yearn - I do appreciate seeing you stopped by - Hugs - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wish it were suzz but its all so temporal sad to say wish i could hold on longer to it too,just gotta live the moment if it comes by and call it love |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Susan- If all love poetry were like this, then I would, no doubt, be more inclined to read it more often. Outstanding job. In the wooden chair |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww geez Susan . . . this is just beautiful, any person would be a damn fool not to. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
M - yes, grab the moment - for all is so transient, isn't it - thanks my friend - for your warm - Ring - you blush me, thank you for such a lovely compliment Littlewing - thanks for stopping by my friend- and for the kind of your reply SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautiful, giving, wanting...and with class....with class! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Ed - most kind and you smile me- SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
God Susan, this is stunning! Well done sweetie. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Donna, you warm my heart with your smile -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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