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Open Poetry #35

Rain

C_ROK06
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 49

0 posted 2005-02-26 04:11 PM

The rain pours
Drenching the ground
Seeping into every crack
Every crevice
Forever trying to fill and sustain
To cleanse
To wash away
The filth and grime
In the earth's very depths
Constantly searching
For some concrete surface
A place to thrive
To accumulate
To grow
A puddle is formed
I pray it holds firm
That a pond will form
A creek
A river
Will it dry out?
Before it overflows?
I pray not

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-02-26 05:38 PM

I can't believe how dry we've been here in Oregon, while California is being saturated.
Rain is good...rain is good, just keep saying that and remember how bad the drought was...
rain is good...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2005-02-26 05:49 PM

good write Victoria...I enjoyed reading all of what you posted today.

C_ROK06
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 49

3 posted 2005-02-26 05:56 PM

Thank you guys. I'm not sure if people see this... but I wrote this as a metaphor. rain to symbolize hope and faith. I thank you all for reading my posts... means a lot to me.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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4 posted 2005-02-26 06:55 PM

yes, I saw that...good job!

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