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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-02-25 04:18 PM

Sounds Of Refrain

I wait
on the edge of
impatient steps
the up and down
of an un-played
contrasting symphony
tone keyed in
this black and white
imprisoned in a prism
of unknown color
break this silence
rescue me
with the shades
of your song

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2005-02-25 04:33 PM

I like this very much, lady... beautiful ending!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2005-02-25 04:38 PM

the up and down
of an un-played
contrasting symphony

It's coming from so faraway,
it's hard to say for sure
if what I hear is music
or the wind through an open door.

(Lyrics by Jackson Browne)

although, we never forget the song.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-02-25 04:56 PM

Oh yes.

hugs, Chris

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-25 05:07 PM

very powerful! what a feeling!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

5 posted 2005-02-25 05:17 PM

Open your door . . . i'm sending a windsong your way

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2005-02-27 10:19 AM

your wait is over
eighty-eight black and white keys
are playing our song
~*~
harken to the tone
listen to the shades of love
as fingers explore

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

7 posted 2005-02-27 12:20 PM

"And when he gets
to those pearly gates
to old Saint Peter he will tell:

One more Marine reporting Sir.
I’ve served my time in Hell."

Unknown Author
Left on a grave on Guadalcanal

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2005-02-27 12:41 PM

OneSlick~
And a lovely sound it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

9 posted 2005-02-27 11:47 PM

Helen- If I hear one more comment about you not liking your writing, I will personally come down there and red this to you over and over and over and over again until you finally realize how good you are at this.

Another masterpiece.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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