Open Poetry #35 |
Take Anything You Want |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your open heart was the take on the matter the things that strike insufferable remain a brief novella in your history the church got all of your mother's money and her body leaving you broke with nothing left but lonely passion the passion trapped in your genes refined out of forgiveness the same passion you would share with me in a world of lost art the art of sincerity distinguished from unworthy passion my mysterious search for wholesome love, drifted out of your windows, your lips, your breath, your very existence....... the first time I looked at your glowing freckled face I thought the freckles would be rough to the touch but you were so fresh and farm girl beautiful that I just had to try, had to somehow steal a stroke, a brush against your skin and when I finally did it was like touching the smooth open blossom of a lily and then our first kiss your lips were moist and full felt like they had been softened by a Godly sent sweet misty spring rain as you gave yourself to me without any apprehension My insides pushed my heart into my throat the magic that sometimes falls out of heaven captured us for the duration it was then I realized passion without love was against the rules of conscience oh how that kiss has never died now that same kiss speaks your mind with love and familiarity, reminds me of your simple brilliance, accompanied by your angel scent and the treasure of a thousand smiles you always give to me free I gently break away and I have to tell you everything is alright you can take anything you want from me. © Eric True IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"passion without love was against the rules of conscience Eric, this is profound, a testament to the depth of soul, the writer's character. A beautiful write. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
beautiful as is sincere |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
beautiful as is sincere |
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